Thank you for listening
By:Taya
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Ki ora Taya! This is a really good argument about why animals should not go on public transport, you have convinced me! I like how you number your statements with first, second and lastly, this makes it clearly for me. Maybe next time to be even more professional you could try embed your work onto your blog? I love your work! Have the best holidays ever!
ReplyDeleteSee ya! Sophia T